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ɪʀᴏɴᴡᴏᴏᴅ ᴇᴍᴘᴇʀᴏʀ ᴇsʜᴀɪ ([personal profile] ironwood) wrote in [community profile] tushanshu_ooc2016-02-23 11:19 pm
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How's My Driving | February 2016

HELLO CHELONAUTS! It's been a while since we've had a game-wide HMD post, so here's the first one of 2016!

How's My Driving?
While each and every character must have an HMD page available, we offer a game-wide HMD once every calendar quarter. This is an opportunity to get together and discuss IC interpretations and portrayals in a respectful, beneficial fashion. In a nutshell, it's a chance to see how we're doing in the grand scheme of things.

There are a few ground rules to cover off before we can start:
  • Participation in the quarterly HMD is 100% optional.
  • Be respectful, anon or not. It's a lot easier to give and receive crit if all parties are making it a discussion of it, rather than an argument.
  • IP logging is off and anonymous commenting is on. You can offer crit signed in if you like, but the option's there.
  • We ask that each concrit provided consist of one positive and one constructive bit of feedback. Bring up something that you like about that player, and in the same comment provide something that you feel they could work on. This is to help round out the feedback and provide a better experience all around.

To make things easier, here's a handy-dandy code box:

dragonaught: (♲ asked if i would come along)

[personal profile] dragonaught 2016-02-24 04:30 am (UTC)(link)
DJ

Character: Cain (Jacob Kane)
Canon: Original ("Reinforced")
Journal: [personal profile] insertdadjoke
Focus: Nothing in particular.

Character: Casey Ramone
Canon: Original ("Dragon Dating Simulator")
Journal: [personal profile] dragonaught
Focus: Nothing in particular.

Character: Will Vega, Jr (Junior)
Canon: Original ("Near-Miss")
Journal: [personal profile] androit
Focus: Nothing in particular.

Personal HMD: Can be found here in case one wishes to use anon concrit.
Edited 2016-02-24 04:39 (UTC)
problematical: (Default)

[personal profile] problematical 2016-02-24 04:34 am (UTC)(link)
Li

Character Name: Yami no Bakura
Canon: Yuugiou
User Name: [personal profile] denyamenti
Focus: Other than making some Very Bad Personal Decisions, he's been on pretty even keel lately. He's got the ghosties back, at the price of Zorc once more hanging around, but overall he's been much happier since. Mostly I've been keeping him on a low profile and not involved in any plots because mod, but I'm always open for character things with him.

Character Name: River Tam
Canon: Firefly
User Name: [personal profile] problematical
Focus: I worry about her voice all the time. I find it really hard to balance her method of speech between brilliant and not making her TOO childlike... that sort of wander-y quality is really hard to portray in text. So definitely feedback on that would be appreciated. I haven't done too much with her abilities yet because even with the permissions post, I'm always concerned about overstepping. But ICly, she's super happy that her brother is here!! ♥
ignitethestars: (Default)

[personal profile] ignitethestars 2016-02-24 04:39 am (UTC)(link)
Jami

Character Name: Anakin Skywalker
Canon: Star Wars
User Name: [personal profile] ignitethestars
Focus: Nothing really.
hadthehighground: (hand through hair)

[personal profile] hadthehighground 2016-02-24 04:40 am (UTC)(link)
Darkfeather

Character Name: Obi-Wan Kenobi
Canon: Star Wars
User Name: [personal profile] hadthehighground
Focus: I've only been playing this guy for a month, so any feedback is fine really.

Character Name: Yuri Lowell
Canon: Tales of Vesperia
User Name: [personal profile] wolfstrike
Focus: For a few months I was struggling with him, but I think I'm doing better now? Either way, sometimes I feel like I'm not doing him justice. Some days and in some situations, I have a hard time finding his voice and I'm afraid he's OOC. Sometimes I also feel like he's too blah? I dunno. Thoughts?
stainedglassreflections: (15 I can't believe anything)

[personal profile] stainedglassreflections 2016-02-24 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
Samm

Character Name: Duke Pantarei
Canon: Tales of Vesperia
User Name: [personal profile] radiantwingedone
Focus: I know I have a massive problem getting him out there, so. IDK anything but that?

Character Name: Sion Astal
Canon: The Legend of the Legendary Heroes
User Name: [personal profile] stainedglassreflections
Focus: I flip-flop between just "oh he's so much fun" and "i am fucking everything up". Probably keeping him him while allowing him to grow in ways that his canon won't allow for, due to. setting problems.
lasergrenades: (Meep)

[personal profile] lasergrenades 2016-02-24 04:51 am (UTC)(link)
Sara/Seal

Character Name: Pepper Potts
Canon: Iron Man: Armored Adventures
User Name: [personal profile] lasergrenades
Focus: I worry I sometimes inject too much of myself into how Pepper thinks, and I've been trying to be careful especially recently to get her involved in things she totally would, even if I wouldn't since I'm terribly conflict averse. Soon to be a year in-game, I'm also working on a balance of her canon self and the growth she's had here, hopefully doing an okay job.
unetrustworthy: (memoirs)

[personal profile] unetrustworthy 2016-02-24 04:58 am (UTC)(link)
Hina

Character Name: Zatanna Zatara
Canon: Young Justice
User Name: [personal profile] backwordscompatible

Character Name: Aya
Canon: Green Lantern: The Animated Series
User Name: [personal profile] looksfine

Character Name: Midii Une
Canon: Gundam Wing: Episode Zero
User Name: [profile] unetrustworhty
hellboundheart: (a thought luv)

[personal profile] hellboundheart 2016-02-24 06:04 am (UTC)(link)
Rob

Character Name: John Constantine
Canon: Constantine
User Name: [personal profile] hellboundheart
Focus: New to the setting and character.
highprofilerichkid: (Default)

[personal profile] highprofilerichkid 2016-02-24 09:39 am (UTC)(link)
Cinna

Character Name: Tony Stark
Canon: Armored Adventures
User Name: [personal profile] highprofilerichkid
Focus: I always worry if I'm striking the right balance and pace with his character development - he's matured a lot in game, and I try to reflect that in having him making better decisions, being more aware of how his actions affect others, and being less absorbed in his own problems. But at the same time, I want to keep his core personality intact, and approach his development with the awareness that going from spoiled teen to responsible adult is a long process that takes more than just a couple years of personal growth.

I don't want him to become boring and predictable as he matures, so I want to give him realistic chances to keep making mistakes, and leave room for negative CR.

On the other hand, I hope I'm not getting overeager with that and making him too obnoxious.

TL;DR: is his development realistic? Is he still fun to play off of, or does he veer into "too boring" or "too grating"?

(I realize that voice and ICness can only really be addressed by people familiar with the canon, but if you have any crit about that I'd love to hear it!)

You can also leave crit on my personal hmd here. Anon on/IP off, comments are screened by default but I'll make anything public if requested.
purrns: (🐾 I've spent most of my time)

[personal profile] purrns 2016-02-24 06:04 pm (UTC)(link)
TF

Character Name: Adrien Agreste/Chat Noir
Canon: Miraculous Ladybug
User Name: [personal profile] purrns
Focus: I'm still super brand new here, but if anyone has any feedback, I welcome it with open arms! He has a private HMD here as well.
Edited 2016-02-24 18:04 (UTC)
brewglory: (Default)

[personal profile] brewglory 2016-02-24 11:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Kristi

Character Name: Severus Snape
Canon: Harry Potter
User Name: [personal profile] brewglory
Focus: I'd just like some feedback. Thanks, all. :)
pompous_today: (watching)

[personal profile] pompous_today 2016-02-26 12:37 am (UTC)(link)
Shurimon

Character Name: Simon Tam
Canon: Firefly
User Name: [personal profile] pompous_today
Focus: Thanks for bearing with my slow tags. Other than that, I'd just like to know if my tags have enough substance to reply to in them and if Simon sounds like Simon.