How's My Driving | April 2013

[ironwood]

Spring has been sprung! All over the Western hemisphere, flowers are blooming, bunnies are bounding, and the little clickity-clack of rper fingers at keyboards is in the air! To kick off the season in style, it's time for our third HMD here at Tu Shanshu.

How's My Driving?
While each and every character must have an HMD page available, we offer a gamewide HMD once every calendar quarter. This is an opportunity to get together and discuss IC interpretations and portrayals in a respectful, beneficial fashion. In a nutshell, it's a chance to see how we're doing in the grand scheme of things.

There are a few ground rules to cover off before we can start:

• Participation in the quarterly HMD is 100% optional.
  
• Be respectful, anon or not. It's a lot easier to give and receive crit if all parties are making it a discussion of it rather than an argument.
  
• IP logging is off and anonymous commenting is on. You can offer crit signed-in if you like, but the option's there.
  

That's it, that's all!

And, to make things easier, here's a handy-dandy codeset:

<big><b><i>Player Name</i></b></big> <i>Character Name:</i> <i>Canon:</i> <i>User Name:</i> <I>Focus:</i> Optional. Do you have particular concerns about your portrayal that you'd like to be the focus of crit? You can link any threads you'd like a second opinion on here. If you're looking for structural feedback, or would prefer things like grammar not be mentioned, put it here.

Comments

[squint]

Chasekat
Character Name: Dominick Cobb
Canon: Inception
User Name: squint
Focus: His voice has been seeming weird, like, a little off? I'm not sure how much of it is because of his canon point in limbo or me as a writer or just imagination. If he IS wonky, let me know!

Character Name: Gavroche
Canon: Les Miserable
User Name: chiot
Focus: You may have noticed Gavroche's 'accent' changing somewhat--that's because I wasn't sure about how he should speak. He's a lot better than he was this month, and I hope it shows. I could DEFINITELY still use crit!

[lostundercover]

I commented on this already, but I hear Cobb's voice in our threads. I haven't noticed a difference, but I admit that I haven't been looking for it? idk. I'd say don't worry about it and maybe just canon review.

[squint]

Aaaah, okay. That's actually good advice, just to watch the movie again and see @_@ Thank you!

[suoxi]

He sounds wonderful to me! I just want more.

[squint]

Thank you. ;_; He's a quiet ol' muse bu I'm working on bringing him out more!

[suoxi]

Let inara help you out bb B]