I really love what you've done with Ace so far! I'm completely canon-blind on OP but I feel like you convey a really amazing sense of 'character' to the way you write him. And I've loved the balance of introspection and dialogue I've seen from you so far? Your writing's pretty polished, and it feels really natural, so I don't think you're padding it too far one way or another.

As for crit: I don't really have any yet! I know you intro'd in the middle of a huge event where a lot of characters were tied up ICly and players OOCly so that makes it a little hard to judge. I'm excited to see where you go with the character from here, though. <3