Thanks for the feedback (and also for commenting so I can't keep editing the top comment, haha). The "uncomfortable situations" thing is a good idea; I haven't been doing that nearly as much as I usually do lately, and now that I look over most of my stuff, it's clear to me that both Harry and Una are way too much within their comfort zones right now. So I'll see what I can do to fix that.

(Harry's headed toward a canon update, which will shake him up a lot. What I do next with Una will depend on how the Malicant plot shakes out, I think.)