lostundercover: (ooc; i heart you)
Billy Costigan Jr. ([personal profile] lostundercover) wrote in [community profile] tushanshu_ooc 2013-07-03 07:03 pm (UTC)

♥: You know I adore writing with you. You have a gift for word choice and construction of description and ideas that is extremely rare and a delight to interact with. You are always open to plotting. I haven't threaded with Henry as much, but I know that Una is an extremely realistic and nuanced character to the point of being a fully fleshed out person. I believe that your inadequacies are primarily a result of overthinking things and that you are a far better player (not writer, but player) than you give yourself credit for. Because I know you know you're a good writer.

°: As has been suggested, I would consider trying to be more proactive in your plotting. Waiting for things to come to you is awesome when you're busy, but eventually it always stagnates and then it's important to put in the work (and it is work sometimes). Another thing that might help, to steal a page from Chel's playbook, is putting your characters in situations that are uncomfortable for them, to really explore more of their depths (which I know you love) and to encourage new CR.

Costigan+Mal=4lyfe♥

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