Kate Character Name: Billy Costigan Canon: The Departed User Name:lostundercover Focus: PLEASE CRIT ME.
Character Name: Johnny Storm Canon: Fantastic Four (MCU) User Name:faceofthe4 Focus: I know I need to add more introspection/motivation to him.
Character Name: Hayley Stark Canon: Hard Candy User Name:everylittlegirl Focus: PLEASE CRIT ME. I'm worried about the balance in expressing her introspection/motivation. I try to reveal things like that she might be lying or might see similarities, but generally don't mention that she wants to murder them or that she's completely playing them or the like because I worry that such unpleasant ooc commentary can reduce the quality of an ic interaction. Any feedback on that would be particularly appreciated.
Kate → Costigan, Johnny Storm, Hayley Stark
Character Name: Billy Costigan
Canon: The Departed
User Name:
Focus: PLEASE CRIT ME.
Character Name: Johnny Storm
Canon: Fantastic Four (MCU)
User Name:
Focus: I know I need to add more introspection/motivation to him.
Character Name: Hayley Stark
Canon: Hard Candy
User Name:
Focus: PLEASE CRIT ME. I'm worried about the balance in expressing her introspection/motivation. I try to reveal things like that she might be lying or might see similarities, but generally don't mention that she wants to murder them or that she's completely playing them or the like because I worry that such unpleasant ooc commentary can reduce the quality of an ic interaction. Any feedback on that would be particularly appreciated.