Clark's probably the character besides mine I know best, so a quick note before I run off to Real Life: thread-stalking, I've seen a ton of 'Kal gets serious' stuff lately and you're hitting that just fine.

If I had to find fault, I think it would be that while you do regular-adult-guy aspects (both Kal and Clark personas), the sarcasm and irony are less apparent. Remember how he is in the newsroom and on the reporting job. I'd say go back through scans and any you really like for the snark, try to emulate.